Rules Were

10 Lines
You Drop First
Ill Drop Later

G'Luck

i'll give no test, and no lesson cuz there's no question whos greater
you'll get wrecked son, and left in more sections then ya newspaper
u should just quit, throw all ya scripts in the trash
cuz the only time anyone "feels ya shit" is when their dicks in ya ass
son i'll be whippin ya ass, have ya neck gripped and you'll gasp
leave u lookin like a lizard ya fag, when i grab the tip of ya tounge and rip it in half
if i dont get a tech, you will get choked or stabbed
i dont fuck with ciggarettes but i'll smoke this fag
i would have thought u was in a track meet, when i saw this cat bookin
but nah he aint no athlete, and all he ever "caught" was an ass whoopin

Your no way near as good¡Kso that¡¦s why im handing u a loss,
Coz when dick be reigning supreme, you only dribble Diana Ross.
No one buys the gangster image¡Kall RB know that ur a bitch,
Coz only when u take out ur plats¡K.do you u have MTclips.
Dicks a real live rhymer¡Kand that¡¦s sumthin that ur not,
So stik to poppin ur zits kiddo..while I really bust up spots.
This dood used to score with chiks¡Kbut„²-aint what it seems,
Because he stopped all that^¡Kwhen kikt off the netball team.
Ur family is known to be interbred that they shud be named hovis,
And dood ur so fukkin wak¡Ku been here a yr and still aint noticed.

w/ swayin votes ur lines are so played...dont beef coz itll take up the post but

if i dont get a tech, you will get choked or stabbed
i dont fuck with ciggarettes but i'll smoke this fag
and
u should just quit, throw all ya scripts in the trash
cuz the only time anyone "feels ya shit" is when their dicks in ya ass

Your no way near as good,so that’s why im handing u a loss,
Coz when dick be reigning supreme, you only dribble Diana Ross.
No one buys the gangster image,all RB know that ur a bitch,
Coz only when u take out ur plats,do you u have MTclips.
Dicks a real live rhymer and that’s sumthin that ur not,
So stik to poppin ur zits kiddo-while I really bust up spots.
This dood used to score with chiks,but that aint what it seems,
Because he stopped all that^ when kikt off the netball team.
Ur family is known to be interbred that they shud be named hovis,
And dood ur so fukkin wak,u been here a yr and still aint noticed.


wtf.....i re wote it because i dunno why it had all those weird fuk ups in it

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Erm, MT Was Ok, Structure Needed Work And Flow Was Off (Long Lines)...Ya Had Sum Concepts There But Didnt Really Pull Off The Punch, And What Punches You Did Have, Were Played Anyways...But Not Bad For A Newbie..

Dick, An Ok Verse, Punches Were There And Were More Original Than MT's...Better Structure And Flow Was Good but I Think Ya Verse Lacked Complexity, But I Know Ya Got It Coz I Seen Better.

Vote - Dick

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I liked mt's opener better, dick's structure was better, punches maybe a bit better but I liked mt's word play better, so if I could pollvote it'd be fore mt, sorry I can't though, so don't sleep on it.

^^right so my punches were better? but he won the battle? rite now i see why ur 0-3

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Better wordplay from MT...

Nice surprise there.

Harder punches from Dick.

Tough decision.

Gonna go with Dick cuz alot, in fact most of his shit was pretty played...

We've all seen the "fag", "feels ya shit/ass", etc...
Before...
But they were nicely flipped, not original, but done well.

That and better personals by Dick.

Peace

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finnally a nice verse.. yo mt clips you have some amazing wordplay dog i was really feeling your verse

between the two verses.. mt clips had better wordplay and better punchlines

dick trator had alot of weak disses like this shit

"Your no way near as good,so that’s why im handing u a loss,
Coz when dick be reigning supreme, you only dribble Diana Ross."

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thanks for the votes

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Good multis... Punch.. aight.

good multis again.... nice punch

aiight..

heh, shouldn't of used this line, it sounds kinda gay.... I get it and all, but no matter how you say it, it sounds gay.... you're gonna smoke a fag, but not a cigarette? U see what I mean?

nice.



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Weak.

mmm.... right... not feelin it


not really feelin it man...

Man, last line coulda been a good personal, but u just didn't word it right. It's still aiight, tho.


Due to multis, wordplay, and better punches,

Vote: MT CLips

Dick Tator, you came aiight, just come a little harder, try workin some multis or wordplay better. Peace


If either of ya could check out this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1

That would be cool....