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Old 01-04-04, 08:02 AM   #5
Dev
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decent drop....some lines could use a few syllables taken out, but....the flow fell in a couple of places but mainly was ok...not keen on the topic.. but it stayed on ,,,,yeah not bad... the vocab could use some work tho.....pZ....
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