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Old 01-03-04, 11:29 AM   #1
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Hood Thugz & Lyrikal Bugz

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Yo check it..


Livin' life as a hoodlum for a chip on his shoulda,
got a learn da life of bein a hood soldja,
poppin pills was a thrill snortin lines was a routine,
gettin happy.. smiling over a dirty magazine,
damn police wanna check my brother clean,
after they hear a gunshot but they at da wrong murder scene,
i cant believe how much rent was put in these projects,
we gotta pay till da day when they make it a fake concept,
livin a thug life is da way mah niggaz live but sometimes bleed,
but everyday ya gotta pray with a gun in yo hand mah niggaz i gotta lead,
i protect what is mine when my neighborhoos is under attack nigga,
dont test me or stress my its tempting to pull da trigga,
"fuck you" as i give you da finga,
parkin lots full of tar always reeked by da 5.0,
yo betta make way dis land is my show,
at night i hear gun shots as i see blood flyin in da air,
death on da corner makes belive dat someone died on da rear,
i wish i never had a betta life look at dis light,
peace nigga "PUFF" as i smoke dis shit and get high as a kite..
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Old 01-03-04, 12:09 PM   #2
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Shit Was Iiigth

But I Dont Like Them Tu-pacish Type Opne Mics
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Old 01-03-04, 03:19 PM   #3
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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Old 01-04-04, 07:30 AM   #4
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that was hevy blud
but some of your lines are off beat
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Old 01-04-04, 08:02 AM   #5
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decent drop....some lines could use a few syllables taken out, but....the flow fell in a couple of places but mainly was ok...not keen on the topic.. but it stayed on ,,,,yeah not bad... the vocab could use some work tho.....pZ....
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