- MYSTERIOSO -

I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED
GOT MY SHELL COCKED/
ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK
Wack, simple rhyme scheme, no punch
TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/
Wack, and flow falls off after words
ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY
U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL)
I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME
Pathetic, word play is simplistic, punch?
WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH
6 KNIVES AND A NINE/
IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER WHETHER OR NOT I WON
Really wack, bad closer, no punch either

Conclusion on MYSTERIOSO
There is a word that can describe this... hmm, what is it???
Ohh, I know wack... It was simplistic, horrible structure, the flow was easy like hores on a paycheck day. No punches that even caused contact from my point of view. You need to do more than elevate, Quite...



- ILLunatic -

Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon
its aight, but no punch, bad closer.
Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed
aight personal, better the words though.
Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality
Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality
pretty good line, It was straight
Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy
Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy
Bad wording, weak punch.
I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again
Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within
pretty good finisher, had a little wit.

Conclusion on ILLunatic
It was a weak verse, But I know you didnt come your hardest. You had weak punches, and the word play was bad. YOu accually had punches and word play. Nice job trying to cover up the structure with the " ... ... ... " LOL. You did just enough to win this...

Vote - ILLunatic


Full Conclusion
ILL cam harder, and he did better than the other guy at everything. He did just enough, and I know that was just toying with him, LOL... Umm, thats all I really have to say. He just beat him at every subject of a battle...

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