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Old 01-05-04, 04:43 PM   #3
Menik
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Yeah i agree this was alright here....your structure in this was pretty good through out it i thought.....you had good flow in this, it stayed on through out the piece, it kinda fell at some points but it was good overall....Like Deva said you got your message across good....overall this was alright, good read....keep at it.
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