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Old 01-05-04, 07:20 PM   #11
SaM sKILLeT
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your so wack i could kill you wit eas
ya boddy is nuttin but leaves flotin in the breaze
your so wack, your wack...like low trapeez
im eatin you up like you some cheese

simple rhymes, weak punches(if you can call them punches)... overall wacknes, sorry.
Quote:
your wack like you mommy
cuz ur from her tummy
ill kill you cuz im deadly like an old mummy
your rhymes is gay...i laugh at them cuz they funny
you can run...back to your ugly hunny
then ask for some chiken from another ugly bunny

Haha, @ you're wack like your mommy cuz ur from her tummy... that's just too funny.
haha.... man are you joking? I sure hope so.... Otherwise I don't know what to say to you

Quote:
For the sake of R.I.P.made up reputation, I'll raise the stakes up and arrange cutes
of tape duct so his gay butt will stay shut with no speculation
Give your verse decoration, so it looks nice in the Hall of shame, then I'll
spit to burst this pesters face in so we all can look at his hollow brain
ok multis... aint feelin the first lines, seconds ones ok.
I'm not gonna waste any more time doing this cuz it's obvious who wins this.

Verstyle, I know this is just a keystyle and whatever, but if this wasn't I would say work on ya flow cuz it get a little stretched.

Vote goes to Verstyle for more complex rhymes, punches, and the works.



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