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*All Rules Apply

*Quike little battle.

*All Votes must be explained


Good Luck!!

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your so wack i could kill you wit eas
ya boddy is nuttin but leaves flotin in the breaze
your so wack, your wack...like low trapeez
im eatin you up like you some cheese
your wack like you mommy
cuz ur from her tummy
ill kill you cuz im deadly like an old mummy
your rhymes is gay...i laugh at them cuz they funny
you can run...back to your ugly hunny
then ask for some chiken from another ugly bunny

LMAO...heres a quike 2min verse ...


For the sake of R.I.P.made up reputation, I'll raise the stakes up and arrange cutes
of tape duct so his gay butt will stay shut with no speculation

Give your verse decoration, so it looks nice in the Hall of shame, then I'll
spit to burst this pesters face in so we all can look at his hollow brain

You'll follow rain, and hit the ground at the sound that amounts to tomorrows pain
when this bout comes out to your vote drought with no need to explain

i'll Block you out without the Coppertone like a solar eclipse, sock your mouth in
your house, take your spouse and hold on her hips

Drop this boulder on your ribs, crush your diaphragm then try and stand on what's
left of your chest but I guess I smoldered your shit

You should give up rap and stay in your bedroom playing polka,
or something else you're good at like spreading your legs, Yoga?

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^^wack shit indeed........lolz

punches - V( he had some......lol.....that enuff here apearantly)
flo- tie(mainly cus RIP only had like 20 words to flow)
meti4's- V(more originall...he had way more than RIP also)
multi's- V(once again....he had some.....RIP didn't)

overall- V....this was a total merkin.....a joke....a waste of my time......lol....

Drop an honest vote on my battle wit .:K:.....thanks

opener:vers
punches:vers
flow:vers
personal:vers
multis:vers
closer:vers
overall:vers

RIP you need to concentrate on elevatin first dude...pick your battles better, try starting with someone more along your skill level...not to be rude or anything but there is a lot you could do to fix up your verse....verstyle's verse was way better, this battle was lopsided...

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o here....i forgot this...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104183

THIS WAS THE WORST RAP I HAVE EVER HEARD IN MY LIFE I MEAN VERSTYLE WAS STRAIGHT BUT WHAT THE HELL WHAT WAS THE OTHER DUD SAYIN EATIN SOME CHEESE?

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LMAO....Upping for some more honest votes on this wack ass battle
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Peace

simple rhymes, weak punches(if you can call them punches)... overall wacknes, sorry.

Haha, @ you're wack like your mommy cuz ur from her tummy... that's just too funny.
haha.... man are you joking? I sure hope so.... Otherwise I don't know what to say to you

ok multis... aint feelin the first lines, seconds ones ok.
I'm not gonna waste any more time doing this cuz it's obvious who wins this.

Verstyle, I know this is just a keystyle and whatever, but if this wasn't I would say work on ya flow cuz it get a little stretched.

Vote goes to Verstyle for more complex rhymes, punches, and the works.



check out this battle, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1

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Hehehe. Man, Verstyle jus be rippin kids these days. He took this in creativity, personals, punches and the works. RIPs verse was extremely basic. No challenge here. Please drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103729

verstyle kills the poor boy. but im sure RIP ALL doesnt care...it didnt sound like he took it very seiously, no offense.....cuz if your quioteable is "your so wack you wack, like a low trapeez"....then ur verse needs work. Verstyle actually punched hard and came expereicned with it......im not really feeelin the structure tho....

my vote: Verse

hit this up please guys

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104090