pretty nice concept...Sort of a "redemption" theme...I give you an 8 on content..

your rhymescheme wasn't above average, but it wasn't too simple...I'll give you a 6.5 on rhymescheme

multis were decent....7.5

nice flow...hook was decent too...8 on that

you worded things nicely...I liked ur first line the most..iono why..I give you a 8.5 on word usage...not vocab or wordplay...


overall nice drop..

peace

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