Blah, man i don't have all day to write a fucking huge reply, when I reply to something you can trust i read it, that's what i'm about... but whatever i'll fullfill your wishes all mighty one.

to alone rejoice if i own a royce - & take life in leaps & bounds
take expression and make a blessing if i was born in mild grace
a true star wont fake progressing; he'll just put on a smily face

That section right there was to me your most impressive. It had the most fluency, and the last line of it was knowledge...

But the piece as a whole can't really be broken down, it was a good drop so the whole thing was basically a quoteable. Like I said, you spit some knowledge in it while boasting - two things that I like in an Off the dome/open mic... You had a nice flow, the multis were well used, and the closed in rhyme scheme worked well with the flow and internals. What more can I say?

Peace.