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Feeble, that was very impressive. a lot of vocab and interesting lines your flow on rhyme scheme made that very good and for a great read. The lenght was a good size, the vocab was good, a lot of things were done very nicely here...the wehole aspect of the song was very well writtin great job man keep it up.
If you can...drop some feedback on 'the art' in my sig thanks that'd be apreciated
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