hmmm..this was amazingly..mediocre..nothing spectacular..umm..I think I can tell what you're talking when you say the devil's existance...ehh..I give this a 6/10..vocab is that great..nothin really great..peace..

that aint tellin me what i should improve on u fuckin bitch. If u think u did then u obviously an idiot. and if u wanted too call me a wack kid why dint u just say it off the bat you fucking piece a shit. I read your piece fagget... and u in no position too be calling me wack, so shut your fucking mouth and keep to yaself, you'll find u make more friends. and that mother shit, thats just somethin a gay cheap fucker would say, so go continue making ya pocket change suckin dick for bums you little cocksucker.