yo dogg i would give this a 4 outta ten yo flow wasn't that good!
this is how you spit yo skit:
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Originally posted by Rev Unit
So this an open diss to anyone who dun take it/
No we aint gangstas and we aint tryina fake it/
Wiggas u claimin? We rakin the cash/
Im dun wit u bitches throw u out wit tha trash/
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this is how i would spit it and rhyme it:
dis iz an open diss-so any motha fucka can take it/
i aint no gangster, and naah i dont beg it/
u claiming ima wigger-just coz ima holding mo doe/
fuck you bitches-come against me u get blowed/
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anyways thats my style, but dogg just keep at it an you'll be better, the best way to elevate, is to take all the feedback u get-even tha negative and boost yourself! piece!