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Old 01-08-04, 05:15 PM   #14
IceMan187
Banned: Racism
 
Posts: 834
From: the illa philadelph
IP:

THE*REIGN*MAN

Dis faggott bitch steaming shit cant ruin my flow//
let me introduce dis pussy, hes a part time ho//
not a bad opener... 5/10
tellin everyone how u a lunatic, and feeling sick//
well dats da side effect of u suckin too much dick//
lol, gettin funny now... 6/10
stop boastin bout ur cash pussy, actin all rich//
dat moneys comin threw coz u get fucked like a bitch//
nice concept there... hit hard that punch did tbh... 8/10
u transexual low-life wich, u feelin the tension//
u look like a fuckin penis wid a constant erection//
dont really understand this lol....3/10
u will neva have the skills to compete lyrically//
if i ever see u, im fuckin u up chump, physically//
this was a nice bar man.... liked that^... 8/10
and im not talkin bout how men serve u in bed//
im talkin bout a piece of metal, goin threw yo head//
i gotta bullit bitch, dats gona fuckin strike u dead//
again, nice... 7/10
i jus throw up da middle finger as a hint of a sign//
da same middle finger dat went threw yo mommas line//
lol, back to the mother disses... *sighs*... nice tho... 6/10

overall... 43/70

not a bad verse... you need to work on structure man... keep elevatin tho... ur doin well...


RAPPER_BIGGA

Here we go again fuckin right //
I'm battling this bitch who we all know is shite //
wack opener ... 2/10
Textbooks, another title of the new gay sex books //
Claiming your the best, join are crew //
Your the queer in the mirror wishing your dick grew //
good... 7/10
little maggit, pouncin around like a faggit //
vaciline tubes so you and your crew can have it //
bad... 3/10
I'm sorry I have to diss ya //
But I aint ridin with ya //
TRASH!! 0/10
MC Aines come on dawg, you'll kill reign for sure //
reign you've sucked too many dicks that why you have a saw jaw //
okay 4/10
Your bladder is full of sperm to the top //
you another pussy wanting to live hip-hop //
light punch.... 3/10
Back away faggit, I hear michael jackson has a spare room //
He's fed up of using his vacume //
that could of been a dope bar... even a winner... but no, spoiled it as the second line is too short... 5/10
Maybe you can teach him some tricks //
on sucking little dicks, giving little boys hicks //
lol, good... dont make up for the previous lines blunder, but yea... nice... 6/10
His house will then be called the HOUSE OF PRICKS //
I'll take your sorry girlfriend suck her tits //
SHOW HER HOW A REAL MAN SUCKS GIRLS CLITS //
bad....not good... 4/10

overall... 34/90

vote goes to reign

rapper bigga was just throwin up sum garbage my dog drop better "Shit" than that horrible display of skills
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