Hmmm....Good Pieces

Rule
Came pretty good with some imagery
Flow was pretty good... stayed consistant
A little bit difficult to read in some places
Structure was pretty good....
Worplay was ok...... Overall........14/20


Born To Kill
Came really dope with imagery
Very interesting read...pretty easy aslo
Wordplay was really good..
Flow stayed pretty consistant through out the whole thing
Dope peice........Overal.......16/20


Vote-Born To Kill
He came a lil better with
Wordplay and imager
it was a lil easy to read and understand

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