Topic: Mind Theory
Verses Due: Jan 9
Voting Ends: Jan 12

just checkin in...good luck btk

Voted On:
Doa Vs....
High Class Vs...

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Good luck to you too, sir.

Checkin in!

Battles voted on...

Key Largo vs. High Class
Taktik vs. LM
Kost vs. Sarcasm

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Another day-ja-vu of opening my eyes to exsistance of regret
Losen oxygen to my brain from stress or lack of death I slept
Go to bed to die or awake while asleep who knows the answer
Nobody really it's another miscomception of realitys cancer
Supposibly theres portals for ghosts and lost souls for after life
Am I able to believe this or is it another conjunction of hype
Leading me to an essance of a marvelous cent of depression
Failure and achievements locked in a sequance of agression
Tears roll down my face like the rapids to a river so casual
I'm longin to no wrong from right fake from real its emotional
Hypicrital boundries of persiverance believe what you see..or
Believe all so you open all wisdom and unlock certian doors
This state of reasoning or is it a state of paranoia to infinity
Never ending doubts about life and who is the key authority
God, Jeesus? Or is it the devil and haties comit or astroid?
Names mean nothing just test questions getting me paranoid
Resulting to why the hell am I writting what am I really doing
Is there somebody beside me that I can not see..I need tuning
Balance of fiction hate lifes restrictions i'm caught in resistance
Tryin to go beyond and above elavation but theres no distance
Just a phrase for instance 'reach for the stars'..why the stars?
Are they bars to a cell for the heavons shining glowing scars
When I look in the mirror is it really me i'm seeing or another
Galaxy in the glass that wonders the same yet tobe discovered
Questions yet to be answered true meaning is a conspiracy
Tobe unanounced we're puppets in lifes drama show..
...thats my mind theory

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Theories of the mind, regularly vary drastically...
No two are exactly one kind, but they're all felt eventually.
EXTREME SEXIST (1920)
A woman's input isn't needed, the hell with her opinion...
Wives' should be kept barefoot, pregnant, and in the kitchen.
If I feel the need to hit the bitch, then I'll simply give a reason...
Like maybe she was acting a witch, outside the Halloween season.
So when the election rolls around, keep it a man's privilege...
Cast ya ballot and vote to never, allow women their suffrage.
EXTREME RACIST (Now)
Fucka nigger, won't even pull a trigger, bullets are worth more...
Money's tight cuz they take jobs from whites, so I declare a race war.
The old days were better, men were go getters, and kept em in place...
Be a recluse or end up on a noose, if you have a black or brown face.
Superiority should reign, and white's have the purity and power...
But I feel nothing but disdain, cuz we're losing it by the hour.
Races getting mixed so we must act quick before my creed is lost...
And if I'd been alive when Hitler thrived, I'd have cheered the Holocaust.
EXTREME FEMINIST (Now)
Never mind those two, they're men, ridiculous complaints I expect...
They can't appreciate silence but embrace violence, yet I'm the weaker sex?
Strength is only physical with them, inside there's no heart...
They're cold and emotionless, and on top of that, aren't very smart.
It's all sports, cars, politics, and their portfolio's net worth...
And cheap young whores that they fuck, while they're wives are giving birth.
Infidelity's in their blood, they even admit they have seeds to sow...
And in order to mark their territory, they're trying to reverse Wade vs. Roe.
So let's join hands, sisters, rise up and conquer these men...
We currently withhold sex to control em, so let's put em on permanent suspension!
EXTREME PSYCHO (now)
Those sniveling worms will forever, live outside the realm of reality...
They're doomed to fail, never prevail, while I act on mine secretly.
I'll tell it to you cuz there's nothin you can do, and I need an outlet...
See, I kill dirty girls who whore in my world, and smell of cigarettes.
It's kind of a passion or more a compulsion, that I long ago quit fighting...
But records of dental have me going mental, cuz I can't control my biting.
As long as no one suspects they should never check, or even look my way...
So I'll continue to put whores on the menu, and let my hunger have it's say.
All these cats are obviously whack, but their theories have affected minds...
So when ya hear the cliché, stop and think twice...does it really take all kinds?

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Hmmm....Good Pieces

Rule
Came pretty good with some imagery
Flow was pretty good... stayed consistant
A little bit difficult to read in some places
Structure was pretty good....
Worplay was ok...... Overall........14/20


Born To Kill
Came really dope with imagery
Very interesting read...pretty easy aslo
Wordplay was really good..
Flow stayed pretty consistant through out the whole thing
Dope peice........Overal.......16/20


Vote-Born To Kill
He came a lil better with
Wordplay and imager
it was a lil easy to read and understand

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thougth both handled the topic well......

born to kill... good imagery, with a nice flow to the peice...easy on the eyes... stayed on topic nicely... from a good angle, and well worded, and some tight wordplay.... overall... 15/20

rule.... again some decent imagery... maybe not so good as born's... but still nice... the verse wasnt as easy on the eyes,,, but still quite clear... again the flow was on point...and the structure..with decent wordplay.. 13/20

quite a close call, but overall thought born, handled it in a slightly more original way.... vote=born to kill

Rule displayed sum good shit here.. n' delt with the topic
nicely.. a good read, with some things that he could improve
here n' there but nothing really to complain about.

Born to kill just killed wit his creativity n' originality.. given,
that there are sum flow flaws.. n' shit but that ight.. he handled
the topic nicely

v/ Born to Kill

good battle.....solid verses...i wasnt really expectin, nyce views by both...........props, tha breakdown:

Born to Kill: rhyme scheme- 6.5, flow- 7.5, story- 8, total= 22

Rule: rhyme scheme- 6.5, flow- 7, story- 8, total= 21.5

close battle, mad props to both, borns story and smooth flow barely edged rule out..............vote- Born to kill

I could see how people could vote the otha way....which their not for sum reason...........sorry rule.........but this site has been taken over by band wagon votes and its pissin me off, we gotta end this shit

good luck fellaz, peace, 1

p.s check my battle vs. Aus

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How are you callin these bandwagon votes...

When you voted for me too?

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lol, i said that i've seen alot of bandwagon votes lately and i could easily see how people would have voted for rule.............its tru....i personally lyked yours more.......but not everyone is alyke..........its becomin known that at rapbattles.com when it rains it poors...........lately, how often have you seen a close battle in terms of votes............you may have seen a close battle...........but bandwagon votes make it look lyke a blow out...........mere followers........and its pissin me off, peace, 1

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