Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
That was a damn good read from the beginning to the end. It doesn't elaborate much on the specific situation, but I can certainly feel all the painful emotions that you've written. That's something.
I think the flow of one line to the next was so perfect, I was halfway through with it before I realized it didn't rhyme. Go figure.
~Shalom~
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