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Old 01-10-04, 02:18 PM   #4
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Nice piece...The perfect legth did water down on how you could have worked the wording a bit. It was nice to touch upon the personalitie's demented pasts. Pretty dope, I don't focus on multies as much, but you could have used a bit more. You had decent vocabulary just awkward points in which your content suffered for bar structure..Dope.
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