'Causing Jake enough greivence to kill himself twice
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damn thats deep..imagery is great in jake's story man...

So he inspired to, act as though he wasn't a real fake,

nice line here but flow was off during second piece an it suffered for it...

As he gave him viscious beating's he pictured, the fingers,
Up and down, the horrible thoughts in his head still linger,
He was touched, he was fucked, as only a young minor,
So he inspired to take back, what threw him in the wire,

heh...that was some sick shit....nicely done made me think...made me think a little too much actually...an it was nice thoughts lol..ill

Hense, he knows he couldn't ever go through reality,
So he kills himself, not his 3 inspiring personalilities...

nice ending but shouldnt have made mic gay...how can he be a battyboy blood lol..jus wouldnt happen...

overall this suffered from its lack of multi's still an interesting piece tho...


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