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Originally Posted By LethalNJectionz
Im ''Filling Blank Wit Lead'' like a ''Contract-N-Pencils''....''Leguminosae Pea Brain'' His ''Contact-Is-Lentil''/

''if photoshop was my weapon i'de use the woodchipper effect'' watch as i ''Disintegrate-Tak''.....lethals known to ''Coerce The Prey'',''Detiriorate This B1tch'' Intimidate-MC wack/

Like ''Sulphinic'' ''Lethal More Explosive'' then ''Hyposulphurous-Acid''.....''Tak Lights Up In Lights''(lol)''Lighter and Polyurthane'' ''Exploding-Kids-With-Gastric-Antacids''!!!/

"Lethal Speaks in Corrosive Tone''like i make Tak deal wit a ''Vitriolic-Scathe''......''Do Away With TakTiK's Complexion'' like an ''Abolished-Face!/

''Polish-Wraiths'',dangerous wit TAKs' the way i Pin-Point....because ''Taks not worth the money'' like a Clip-Joint!/

Weak structure
Punches were weak
Personals lacked
Flow was ok...hard to read with all your " ' { ( ) shit
Wordplay .... ok..
Overall......8/20

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Originally Posted By Taktik. Ill
My predictions even said Taktik will be killin this troll..
So many heads pictured ya losin, we ran out of film on the Roll..

though our records wont relate after this, i’ll still find him 'n I alike..
cuz mine will be a good 4-nothing, ‘n he’s been that his entire life..(0-1)
Learn my craft cause to me: This fucking nerd is basic..
Cause if losing builds character....you’re it’s 1st creation!

^^some wont get that, im equipped wit plenty rhymes..
to go over ya head, like ya mans ass during a sixty nine..

I got 1000 reasons why I'll win. So don't brave it, dirtbag..
Cuz the 1001st is bound to be whats saved on your wordpad..

just an old man wheelin his wheelchair, come on dawg, retire..
had to stop chasin his dreams...cuz his arms were tired..

Lethal got an ALIEN face with some dirty spots…
He look so much like E.T. CBS gave him their 7:30 slot..

Puches decent
Structure sucked.. dont space shit out
Flow was good
Personals were decent
Wordplay.. was ok
Overall.............10/20

Vote-Taktik. Ill