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Blind spit... check ins are already done... p'z

checkin

when r u dropin son

an your alias name where wut... i no u where on the site before
holla back when u drop tell me later i dont wanna make shit up on u

checkin

when r u gunna drop 10 mins 20 25

ill drop in bout 5.......................................... 100 characters a bitch......................

heres my verse:

Im ''Filling Blank Wit Lead'' like a ''Contract-N-Pencils''....''Leguminosae Pea Brain'' His ''Contact-Is-Lentil''/

''if photoshop was my weapon i'de use the woodchipper effect'' watch as i ''Disintegrate-Tak''.....lethals known to ''Coerce The Prey'',''Detiriorate This B1tch'' Intimidate-MC wack/

Like ''Sulphinic'' ''Lethal More Explosive'' then ''Hyposulphurous-Acid''.....''Tak Lights Up In Lights''(lol)''Lighter and Polyurthane'' ''Exploding-Kids-With-Gastric-Antacids''!!!/

"Lethal Speaks in Corrosive Tone''like i make Tak deal wit a ''Vitriolic-Scathe''......''Do Away With TakTiK's Complexion'' like an ''Abolished-Face!/

''Polish-Wraiths'',dangerous wit TAKs' the way i Pin-Point....because ''Taks not worth the money'' like a Clip-Joint!/

kinda shitty, but ill get better

come on man, been a half-hour... post ur shit................ fucking 100 characters.....................

aite shit i thought ud come harder..but not bad style iguess..

a bit chopppy..

checkin..

aite..
beat drops.
like this kid



My predictions even said Taktik will be killin this troll..
So many heads pictured ya losin, we ran out of film on the Roll..

though our records wont relate after this, i’ll still find him 'n I alike..
cuz mine will be a good 4-nothing, ‘n he’s been that his entire life..(0-1)
Learn my craft cause to me: This fucking nerd is basic..
Cause if losing builds character....you’re it’s 1st creation!

^^some wont get that, im equipped wit plenty rhymes..
to go over ya head, like ya mans ass during a sixty nine..

I got 1000 reasons why I'll win. So don't brave it, dirtbag..
Cuz the 1001st is bound to be whats saved on your wordpad..

just an old man wheelin his wheelchair, come on dawg, retire..
had to stop chasin his dreams...cuz his arms were tired..

Lethal got an ALIEN face with some dirty spots…
He look so much like E.T. CBS gave him their 7:30 slot..



LOl

i think for sum reason i came a bit harder


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uppin for votes in this biatch............................................ ...................................

uppin for sum votes damn slepted on hwere the votes at
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uppin for sum votes damn slepted on hwere the votes at
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Weak structure
Punches were weak
Personals lacked
Flow was ok...hard to read with all your " ' { ( ) shit
Wordplay .... ok..
Overall......8/20

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Originally Posted By Taktik. Ill My predictions even said Taktik will be killin this troll.. So many heads pictured ya losin, we ran out of film on the Roll.. though our records wont relate after this, i’ll still find him 'n I alike.. cuz mine will be a good 4-nothing, ‘n he’s been that his entire life..(0-1) Learn my craft cause to me: This fucking nerd is basic.. Cause if losing builds character....you’re it’s 1st creation! ^^some wont get that, im equipped wit plenty rhymes.. to go over ya head, like ya mans ass during a sixty nine.. I got 1000 reasons why I'll win. So don't brave it, dirtbag.. Cuz the 1001st is bound to be whats saved on your wordpad.. just an old man wheelin his wheelchair, come on dawg, retire.. had to stop chasin his dreams...cuz his arms were tired.. Lethal got an ALIEN face with some dirty spots… He look so much like E.T. CBS gave him their 7:30 slot..

Puches decent
Structure sucked.. dont space shit out
Flow was good
Personals were decent
Wordplay.. was ok
Overall.............10/20

Vote-Taktik. Ill

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
on this site
damn slepted on
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taktiks flow was alright .i can atleast read his stuff
LethalNJectionz sucked big time i couldnt read his
for shit. so my vote would have to go to taktik

tactic ill, came a lil harder than leathel, harder punches but of you came pretty weak though!!!

nice battle
peace

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