not bad really:
nice content I agree about the long bars. fresh ideas but I couldn't catch the flow at all. I think you are putting this to a beat and extending 1 line over 4 bars. tried to bust it myself but the bars are just too fucking long. follow the snare man, it's difficult but you need to say more or less what you are saying, just in about half the time. Uh... I confused myself there
maybe someone could try to put that into a bit better words but I hope I helped, keep writing
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