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 LM - You had some really nice punches in there.  Some were weak,  but most brought a nice effect.  I liked the BTK line.  You could have used more personals maybe,  but thats no biggie.  It had a good flow,  alright wordplay,  and over all pretty good.  Just bring more personals if you can.  Nice drop.
 UnderRated - Your verse was over all very weak.  There was just about 1 punch in there that really brought some effect.  Your structure just fucked everything up.  It made your flow very sloppy,  and you need to work on vocab.  I expected more,  just work on the punches,  structure,  and the effect of your lines...
 
 With out a dought...
 
 VOTE - LM
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