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Old 01-11-04, 07:35 PM   #5
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LM - You had some really nice punches in there. Some were weak, but most brought a nice effect. I liked the BTK line. You could have used more personals maybe, but thats no biggie. It had a good flow, alright wordplay, and over all pretty good. Just bring more personals if you can. Nice drop.

UnderRated - Your verse was over all very weak. There was just about 1 punch in there that really brought some effect. Your structure just fucked everything up. It made your flow very sloppy, and you need to work on vocab. I expected more, just work on the punches, structure, and the effect of your lines...

With out a dought...

VOTE - LM
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