J.R. - You had an alright flow, it was consistant and didnt really seem to fall off. You had punches that had a start, but no finishing effect. Maybe work on the effectiveness of your punches. The structure was choppy, but didnt interfear with the rhyme scheme. It was an ok verse, but I dont think your punches were fully brought.

LM - You had very nice structure, and the flow was pretty good. You added some personals in there, havent seen you do that befor. You had some pretty good punches, but the others wernt as effective. The rhyme scheme was simplistic. The structure made up for that though... You also had some meta's that stood out, nice work on that...

Vote = LM

( Pretty good battle, but LM took it. Keep elevating J.R. )

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