This was a great write. I loved the imagery and reality of this. You painted a picture with this. I loved the world play and the vocab usage. Some of the flow was hard to get, so maybe make it a little easier on points. You know what I mean... But I really did enjoy this. I even read it during my computer class... LOL, thats right now. Good job hommie, I enjoy reading your writes. Keep it up...

( Please return the favor and peep the open mic drop in my sig, would be appriciated )

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