It was just to simplistic, and not creative enough. You have the right idea, to come hard and try not to let loose. Just need to add the creative punches and personals in there. Cause thats what people enjoy. Anyone who has seen and remembered my disses in here, knows I bring mad personals. Just work on it, think more. There aint nothing wrong with writing somthing in like 30 minutes. Just keep it up, and handle that little beef, aight hommie...

( RETURN THE FAVOR AND PEEP THE OPEN MIC IN MY SIG PLEASE, APPRICIATED )

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