it's like no matter what we do or where we go
people tryin to control the world, with their money and dough

^ Isnt money and dough the same thing? currect me if im wrong ^

I thought you had a good topic. It was a simple write, but you still added a nice feel to it. Both of you did, by putting in your personal opinions on it. I respect that. You had alright vocab, maybe work on that a little bit. Structure, just legnthen the lines. It was an over all average rap, but I liked the feel of it. Nice drop hommies...
Keep elevating...

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