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Old 01-15-04, 11:16 PM   #5
Gene Pool
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lotsa nice multi's man but your flow was a lil choppy found it kinda hard to read, structure needs imporvement to but good content for sure and some impressive vocab. but yea juss work on your structure mostly makes for easier reads. keep droppin peace.

check out mine and Yaz's new collab called "Stories of Old ft. Yaz" and leave som feedback plaz. muchly appreciated thanx in advance.
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