I know you can do better...

It was alright, simplistic rhyme scheme. Had good use of the vocab though, cause the verse was so short. The structure was clean, but how hard is it to keep it clean when its that small. LOL . I liked how you used the topic name IN the flow. So that was pretty good. Alright drop hommie...

( PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND PEEP THE OPEN MIC FLOW IN MY SIG, APPRICIATED )

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