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Old 01-16-04, 05:04 PM   #10
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Cata pulled the merk...

With a kinda ugly, stretched format...

But nonetheless, a merk.

Good personals on his verse.

Good flow, tight punches.

Alot of filler, almost too much.

But for what he threw (obviously could be directed at anyone)...

You did the job.

Other guy, try and make ya insults anout your opponent.
Fuck with his sig, his avy, his profile...
Shit like you threw is so generic and so possibly a pre-write.
It really loses power on account of that.

Plus, you didn't add any wordplay or metas, really.

Just sometight vocab.

Cata, for the real battle verse.

Holla back...
Vote here, please!!!
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