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cata strophix... im clairvoient in your decimation, i predict your soul has reservation in hell, never to expiereince levitation, just as in life you will never complete elevation, when you're continually eaten alive by sptters like sublime, im worthy of awe and praise..you aren't even worthy of death..so you're destined to wander the earth while your flesh whithers away and your bones decay...fuck rhyming, i spit ectoplasm to haunt your nights and darken your days...rejected by life and death..you strugle in a state of no existence..strokin your dick ith persistence..curled in a fetal position out in the gutter as sewer water serves as your cover...you shiver and shudder but never get sick..the diseases see you and decide to inhabit a puddle of wet shit...you mean nothing, you are nothing, you will always be nothing...fucka line limit..fucka rhyme gimmick..i came at you life? naw i came at your being FUCK YOU

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fuck you c section change my shit back dhkfhlfhlfhklhklhhfklahilgfblbfilgfbilfhilhlfnhslf dfsgfgdfgsdfgsdfg

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

This aint a runnin race…cuz u cant run this pace—so I catch u and meet u …GUN 2 FACE
Leave ya mug replace with a shove and shake… cuz theres NO Way I can lose –when ur 1-N-8

I don’t want this hate..but I feel like its my undone fate..to kill these Mc..to make the world Shun-these fakes
I got a New blunt 2 make..cuz Ima smoke this herb-that’s this nerd’s only way HE’d ever be somethin great
(AAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA) (you just got shit on)

Testin the Cata_strophical battle slash topical ----Son of a great like I’ma prophical prodigal-
My metas and multis against you is comical--- I’ll wip ya ass with a mic stand and put u in the hospital

Son you’ve been Sunned And shit on..to post that fast I’ma rip up that paper that u had that shit pre writ-on
1-n-9---subblime get Destroyed by 1line…the sick son -Ive seen kids lose BUT he replys and submits ONE

fuck this last bar –I reallt don’t need it ---10 lines-------------------I did AGREE IT
See this-----------------I mean this------1…2….3….4…5..and like that ur defeated

ok so i think that cata took this one....he had some really nice punches the smokin herb one was by far his best.....sublime yours sounded more like your a topical writer to me than a battler you really didn't throw many punches....as far as personals go ..sublime attempted a couple but it just wasn't enough to take this battle seeing as how cata dropped a really nice verse....both of y'all did a fine job just thought cata was in more of a battle mood you both need a lil less filler....one..hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107391

catastrophix took this battle, better punches and personals...sublime, nice vocab and shit but your flow was all over the place and your structure needs some improvement, not bad but no really hard hitting punches and very few personals

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hey return the favor and vote on the battles in my signature if you guys could, thanks

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Cata pulled the merk...

With a kinda ugly, stretched format...

But nonetheless, a merk.

Good personals on his verse.

Good flow, tight punches.

Alot of filler, almost too much.

But for what he threw (obviously could be directed at anyone)...

You did the job.

Other guy, try and make ya insults anout your opponent.
Fuck with his sig, his avy, his profile...
Shit like you threw is so generic and so possibly a pre-write.
It really loses power on account of that.

Plus, you didn't add any wordplay or metas, really.

Just sometight vocab.

Cata, for the real battle verse.

Holla back...
Vote here, please!!!

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uppin TO CLSOPE THIS //////////////////////////////////

both need to plant a seed and grow a structure....seriously...

As for as the rest goes.....Cata took the punches, meti's, personals, and wordplay....
Sublime's was more of a song....It had like no punches but sweet flo mixed wit sum nice multi's....none the less not a battle piece.....
when u battle dont drop topicals....thats what it looked like....
sub- dont write in paragraph form
cata- kill the herb structure....

vote - cata...
drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107857