Obvious win for Zarbon..
Hotbarz elevate work on the overall complexity for ur pieces..
Browse through the higher battle regions of the site & see how they battle.
..Apply wit & comedy to your punches to increase impact.
Then mix those up with facts..to create personals.
Also your lines where way to short..& dont capatalize the ending of ur lines..
..You came far to simplistic & didnt include punches.
Zarbon wasn't great either but far better then his opponent.
Better structure..& talkin catagory's?..he takes them all.
Punches etc..
so vote Zarbon.

vote Zarbon