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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Zarbon 3 100.00%
HotBarz 0 0%
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Old 01-11-04, 09:41 PM   #1
HotBarz
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HotBarz vs Zarbon

IP: 4577 CD9A

10 lines MIN....no real max
no hate
no crew
no d/r

due in 30 min...
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Old 01-11-04, 09:51 PM   #2
HotBarz
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this cat thinks hes tough/
keyin shit he shouldnt be sayin/
but my ryhmes could game pieces/
and they still wouldnt be PLAYIN/
think ur gonna beat me/
wit no write style/
my punches will give u hits/
that will change ur whole lifstyle/
give up fast or u can see the toast/
they should call me a kicker/
the way im bout to kick this cats ass between his posts/
if rap was a dick...homey u would get sucked/
but since rap is pussy/
i geuss uz gettin FUCKED..

finisher...
this bitch cant test....i geuss some need figgas/
cause he spits the same ryhme for 7 DAYS/
that means hes 1 WEEK nigga/
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Old 01-11-04, 10:39 PM   #3
Zarbon
Flyweight
 
IP: 2F88 0124

oh shit i forgot about this sorry bro..its coming right now



Fuck around with me kid? Break a leg, hollow and faceless
The funny thing is, good luck does not follow my statement
Cause exposing your flow is,garbage starts when you rhyme begins
cause I ripped through all your hardest darts,simply by signing in
I'm just being honest, I'm not bluffing at all
he held his head in shame, and his lips got stuck to the floor
that mouthpiece man, it's just disturbing as shit
so forget surfing the web, I'mma start surfing your lip
I finally figured out why nobody knows you
Cause you really aint nice with your shit so nobody’s s’posed to
you've already lost this match, so don't try to come so tough
cuz if laughter's the best medicine,you're the new wonderdrug
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Old 01-11-04, 10:48 PM   #4
NaStRaDaMoUs1
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hotbarz...lets go fuck dis nIcCa...ill take ya shyt wit sumthin u can understand..ZaRbOn..Go bUy a stYLe..lets go set sumthin set up barz..1nE
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Old 01-11-04, 11:42 PM   #5
Zarbon
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IP: 2F88 0124

^^^^^^
dont know what the fuck is up witht that faggot..anyways uppity


shit nastydamous when this battle is done mount up punk!!!
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Old 01-12-04, 03:03 PM   #6
Zarbon
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umm lets get this up and yo how come you didnt up this so we can get some votes..not vote ya



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Old 01-12-04, 03:53 PM   #7
Zarbon
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uppiing for the last time to get some damn votes..noone ever votes on shit around here..whats the dilly yo






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Old 01-12-04, 06:07 PM   #8
Zarbon
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upping this shit again..lets get some damn votes ont his shit..peeps be sleeping yo




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Old 01-13-04, 06:37 PM   #9
HotBarz
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forreal can we get soem damn votes please...cause i merked this cat............................................... ....................................
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Old 01-13-04, 07:04 PM   #10
t-west
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fuk, i wroite a long ass report on this battle and the site didnt post it. grrrr...well anyways. Zarbon took this battle. He had better punches and a more complex verse. HotBarz...even tho I like ur style, many guys here won't appreciate it and they'll give ya a low rating on it...just read sum LLL battles and see how those guys set ur der lines. Flow was pretty much a tie to me...not much I can comment on there, pretty much even since they were both and easy read. Anyways...Zarbon won dis.

v/ - Zarbon
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Old 01-13-04, 07:05 PM   #11
t-west
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both of ya plz drop honest votes on my battles in ma sig. thx.
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Old 01-17-04, 12:25 AM   #12
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Old 01-17-04, 12:33 AM   #13
Daz
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dont matter...zrabon wins..merked hotbarz in every category

v-zarbon

return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107487
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Old 01-17-04, 10:12 AM   #14
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My vote goes to Zarbon cuz HotBarz really didnt come hard with his punches and Zarbon`s lines were longer so he had more disses to fit in..................Imma do a poll vote for Zarbon
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Old 01-17-04, 10:17 AM   #15
Straight Ace
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Obvious win for Zarbon..
Hotbarz elevate work on the overall complexity for ur pieces..
Browse through the higher battle regions of the site & see how they battle.
..Apply wit & comedy to your punches to increase impact.
Then mix those up with facts..to create personals.
Also your lines where way to short..& dont capatalize the ending of ur lines..
..You came far to simplistic & didnt include punches.
Zarbon wasn't great either but far better then his opponent.
Better structure..& talkin catagory's?..he takes them all.
Punches etc..
so vote Zarbon.

vote Zarbon
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