Jay - Your verse was to simplistic. There wernt any punches in there, or anyones that brought effect that is. The rhyme scheme was horrible, that structure was just choppy. It was just a bad verse, its a battle... Not a wanna be G Unit Session...
Elevate...

Seven - Your verse wasnt as good as a couple you droped befor. Almost all punches were weak. You had the right idea hommie, just word them a little better. Your working on creativity I see. Your structure was straight, and you stuck with a regular rhyme scheme. It was an alright verse, just need to work on the effect of your punches...

Vote - Se7en

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