hmmm...not a great battle..but not horrible...
Fuck up had a diffrent style verse...the vocab was pretty nice..and the flow was ok...also had a better structure...not many good punches though..a few tho....rhymescheme was also kinda basic..but the line about the rubber in the baby seat....dude..I don't know if I read it wrong or what, but it sounds like ur saying that you fucked his baby brother...lmao I'm not sure that's the best way to diss someone in a battle...altho this site does seem to like some things that other sites don't lol...
Sare 2....ur verse was kinda...not what I expected..decent rhymescheme was the only thing I liked about it...the flow was off alot of the time, the structure made it look boring...and you focused on the fact that he didn't know 10 lines was a mininum...lmao...I didn't even know 10 lines was a mininum until about 5 minutes before I read this battle...anyway u have some elevatin to do, but ur verse wasn't horrible..just not enough for the W
vote- Fuck Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=95795
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