aight bars 10 min max is anythin you spit 1st

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aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

what the fuck man? first you said 6 lines minimun and 10 maximum. i'll spit, that is after you make up your fucking mind.

10 lines min the new rule... my god and your callin me a newb

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aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

ok if you dun check in by 8:00pm its an automatic lose for you

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dun worry i aint done
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aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

aight here goes, i'm a spit. right away, and you have to reply soon

learn to spell before you get sent to hell with the signaling of this bell/
i cast a spell on the mic and send swells of venom at all you shirelles/

you prepubescent adolescent shoulda learned “not to fuck with me”/
he feels violated, cuz this brother found my rubber in his baby seat/

yous a no man, finding people to fuck with like another “ho man”/
pardon me, but this is like Yao Ming versus Gary “Cole-man”/

like a lyrical “mic tyson” its nothing he’s seeing when i start the beating/
he wants me to “feed” him my shit cuz thats the only way its me hes “eating”/

so to keep shit going, i’ll pointout that your rhymes are just faggot affection/
stretching your lines out like elastic is the only way you get “A-Tension”/

i inadvertently get at your heart “strings” like i play the “fiddle wrong”/
your game is far from “elevated”, but i’ll make it “get low” like that “little john”/

round the bend here comes the end i stop your fire like i was “dousing jets”/
i’d risk my nerves, that i have better words, now isn’t that an “ALPHA-BET”/
while you be spoutin teks, like a home run i’m “uppin and outtin” vets/
bend your back into a crack, now your whole body is in a “convex”/

when you battle me its plain to see, that i will leave you with sleep less nights/
you “never knew what was “comin” like you were fuckin with hermaphrodites/

i’m robbing your bloodstream, like when your little boyfriend jerked ya/
i must have buried you in a “swamp”, cuz dawg, I FUCKIN “MURKED” YA/

ok now its your turn. spit back.

rip your shit up like a basectamy
im fed up with your wak rhymes but they dun affect me
fuk wats expected of me
nuttin should be expected till its done
i shouldn't be expected to leave till i say 1
im havin fun and im not done
i spit the rhymes that give you a heart attck die liek big pun
you think you hard look me in the eye
you be lookin hollow
all you do is sit bak smile and swallow
my rhymes will leave u headless like sleepy hollow
blat nigga hold dat
this nigga stuck to my rhymes like a motha fukkin thumb tack
im shootin buck bullets
not those paint balls mack
the ones that you get hit by and DON'T COME BAK
for you im reallly not in the mood
you kall me a newb
when i basicly been on the sight as long as you
but not as long as it takes you to respond
i come bak quicker merk you and throw you in a pond
im playin "chess" go after the pawn
im lyrically shootin bullets threw ya vest
eatin up ya chest
im the best never the less
finding his condom on my baby seat?
i think that line rite there claims defeat
ill tell the D.A. to put that on file
you a motha fukkin petafile
we got it in your words no time for bullshit denile
this punk tallks about spellin ask him what a synonym
you punk bitch wanna be a fukken eminem
fuck up just mad kuz niggas is not fillin him
im just motha fukkin hardcore drillin him
tell me why this fool did not know 10 lines was minumum?

fuck up

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I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

ok sare here are the rules for voting:

first to 5 wins
no dr, crew, hate, love, votes.
no one line votes either, explain them.

aight fine you could have shortened it by saying no bullshit or you kan tell me a story

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that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

uppin for votes on this thread, and i will vote on other posts.

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I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

hmmm...not a great battle..but not horrible...

Fuck up had a diffrent style verse...the vocab was pretty nice..and the flow was ok...also had a better structure...not many good punches though..a few tho....rhymescheme was also kinda basic..but the line about the rubber in the baby seat....dude..I don't know if I read it wrong or what, but it sounds like ur saying that you fucked his baby brother...lmao I'm not sure that's the best way to diss someone in a battle...altho this site does seem to like some things that other sites don't lol...

Sare 2....ur verse was kinda...not what I expected..decent rhymescheme was the only thing I liked about it...the flow was off alot of the time, the structure made it look boring...and you focused on the fact that he didn't know 10 lines was a mininum...lmao...I didn't even know 10 lines was a mininum until about 5 minutes before I read this battle...anyway u have some elevatin to do, but ur verse wasn't horrible..just not enough for the W

vote- Fuck Up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=95795
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