This IMO will be inevitably sick in audio, to really experiance it in written, it is difficult but hearing it in audio will make it alot clearer. You have some dope vocab here, left room for breath control and shit...might look a little unstrucured, but it will be dope in audio form...

"Im bemused with myself, and all the wealth that’s in my verses
I don’t rehearse this shit on purpose, I make you surplus… to requirements
Cos my environment is not a circus, no room for clowns… ya heard it?
So observe it and fucking learn it…" - i could quote the whole verse cos it was ill, but that is one of the best....

sick dawg, as for a text piece 3/5 but would be alot more in audio.