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shawty"B"
From: Tha many wishes that people make in their dreams...tha depths of a cutters cuts...as shallow as they seem |
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ok this is a gud attepmt but haiku counts lead 5-7-5
your first poem lead counts 6-8-6
your secnd one lead counts 5-8-6
the first one looks like you just made a count mistake but the secnd one just luks like u wer mixed up..... gud try tho............return tha fava!
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JUST TRY AND STOP ME !!
........Shangri La........
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