yo bro some sick shit like LA said alot of rythmic words and lines in this piece and I know for a fact this would flow nicely on audio but ya had some really good wordplay in here very good job on that, multi's and vocab were plentiful to nice shit. keep up bro. peace.

yo man peep my collab with Yaz and some feedback would be muchly appreciated, it's called "Stories of Old" thanx in advance bro.

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