Topic- I think ya had a nice verse....i think ya had good structure.......and flow was really nice Man I enjoyed it very Much......I think ya started it off really nice with ya Vocab..ya had a few Multis I spotted So Try and Add more..ya Wordplay was Good Man....i think your verse was good to start it...good piece

C. man (Credz)- ya had good strucutre like always..i enjoyed this verse but i still think ya Flow could be a bit betta man but it was still good.....i enjoyed ya vocab and ya wordplay...u did well to follow Topic And came with a good verse man..i enjoy your multis very good ..It was Good i enjoyed it alot man...keep it droping Kuz...

Penskills- you had a very short ver but i enjoyed it....very simple flow but it still was Good....Ya Made it good to end it off with Like a Short verse so ya DOnt drag out the ending so yea that was good....i think ya could of add more multis in this..ya vocab was Pretty Good And Ya Used ya Rhymes Well.....but it was dope for 7 lines man keep it droping...