Thread: Penskills vs CL
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Old 01-21-04, 07:50 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by LM
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Penskills - Flow was choppy in some places but in there you added the odd witty punchline. But I think you worked on the age thing a bit too much. Structure could also of been improved but overall you did Ok but I think your better in topicals

CL - You feeded a lot which is not a good sign at all. Punches were weak and never really connected. But I think your flow was slightly better at the start....need to improve drastically.

v/ Penskills

Overall this was a weak battle.....both seemed like they lacked some sort of spark and flare which separates the good and the average. Judgin by this battle alone I would say both are average

yea man i agree wit this here.............................
good battle from both but penskills did come better...............
both had whack ass structure though........................
vote......................................penskill s.....................k
hit this up in return k
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069
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