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01-20-04, 09:50 AM
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Penskills vs CL
IP: 4577 CD9A
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01-20-04, 10:15 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Great now I`m stuck in a battle with this kid with fake characteristics..
This man says he`s 21 but aint got no pubic hair and wears portable lipstick.. I need to give you some one to look up too so just stair for an instant.. I exceed every high breed of your kind.. Cause all you do is repeat, you needa receipt for your stolen rhymes.. I should give your ass a brake, its 12 not 21 your raps trash and mis-shaped.. Waiten patiently as the docter gives the results, You slept with 21 little 12 year old boys 1 gave you aids its all your fault.. But don`t even make me tell your Mister, What the main cause and sorce is from thouse blisters.. Its kinda funny that your sister, has the same thing inside her clit-er-IS this the your final apperance.. To shamed to compete again with your vinal lyrics.. I pull your spine out from your spirit.. |
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01-21-04, 06:14 AM
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IP: 0D0E 3DA1
Ma pen-killz, all of your pen-cil skillz
U’s about to get dropped like kitchen utensils You tense-feel, ma wrath, this is gonna be ure version of black sabath U bouts to get extinct like a black mammoth All dat shit u be talking..is it from experience Bitch to get in da club, u need a fuckin clearance After my interference, I guess it’ll be ure last appearance I don’t need a receipt for stolen rhymz, I think u need to visit a doctor for swollen eyes The only thing u exceed in ma knid is being dumb Stutterin all through the battle like u’s a choke gun U lil’ shit I got penz thats bigger than you, rhymz sicker than you And your aids, I’m gonna get u twisted like braids High school drop out, all you want is ma cock out Talking about I rape kidz, we know dats a hint allu want is my dick We not all like you, sum of us got hair in our pubics But unlike u, sum of us don’t share the same parents with stupid, stupid You got worse rhymz than my sistas, u need to go home and nurse those blisters And yo, don’t next time address me as mister..
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01-21-04, 06:45 AM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: 17AC 3451
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Penskills - Flow was choppy in some places but in there you added the odd witty punchline. But I think you worked on the age thing a bit too much. Structure could also of been improved but overall you did Ok but I think your better in topicals CL - You feeded a lot which is not a good sign at all. Punches were weak and never really connected. But I think your flow was slightly better at the start....need to improve drastically. v/ Penskills Overall this was a weak battle.....both seemed like they lacked some sort of spark and flare which separates the good and the average. Judgin by this battle alone I would say both are average |
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01-21-04, 07:37 AM
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
penskills takes this one easily!!!1
his had a better fromat, punches, and an overall better verse!!! both you need to elevate hough just keep it up!!! peace |
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01-21-04, 07:40 AM
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108439
^can one of you finish me off in this!!!^ |
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01-21-04, 07:50 AM
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IP: EC0B 84C7
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yea man i agree wit this here............................. good battle from both but penskills did come better............... both had whack ass structure though........................ vote......................................penskill s.....................k hit this up in return k http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069 |
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01-21-04, 07:51 AM
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IP: 6F9E F23B
quiite a poor battle....but no breakdown needed cos of the wackness
Penskillz wins by default in my eyes...cos he acually thru punches that made me laff....a bit.. hit the battle up in my sig!!! |
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01-21-04, 11:02 AM
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IP: C1DA C961
..thanks for the votes.....
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01-21-04, 11:15 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Meh
Penskills- some nice punches, some clever points, flow was off but in'a battle flow dont really matter, text wise, but some nice fillers, okie verse. CL- Gay. black mammoth? could of really hit hard with that line if you would of maybe worded it differently, some okie fillers but nothing to specail. Over all, nothing really here. Penskills barely takes this. CL..you got potential just try and read over your verse and re-word things see if it sounds better that would help. Peace Vote. Pen
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01-21-04, 12:31 PM
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IP: 6EB7 0673
penskills takes this 1 easy he had better flow harder punches etc cl u had a good structure and a few gd punches but wernt consistent enuf
both yall elevate a bit but ma vote is penskills on this 1
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