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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
Meh
Penskills- some nice punches, some clever points, flow was off but in'a battle flow dont really matter, text wise, but some nice fillers, okie verse.
CL- Gay. black mammoth? could of really hit hard with that line if you would of maybe worded it differently, some okie fillers but nothing to specail.
Over all, nothing really here. Penskills barely takes this. CL..you got potential just try and read over your verse and re-word things see if it sounds better that would help.
Peace
Vote. Pen
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