Thread: {Father & Son)
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Old 01-21-04, 04:27 PM   #11
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yea i liked this PenSkill...i think this was really good i think ya did well with ya structure but ya lines seem a bit stretched it was still good...i enjoyed ya flow in this really good i liked it quite alot.....i think ya vocab was good with your wordplay and made good imagery on this.....yea this was Tight Man i really think it was good....PeacE....
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