Real Nice Piece Here Man. . Imagery Was Good Throughout. . You Helped Improve The Content, Which Was Dope. . I Think The Sentimental Pieces Are Dope Cause They Show Your Actual Emotions. . Multi's Helped The Flow. . Which Was Consistent. . Feeling This Man. . Pz.
Park Fate..
& Let It Remain Idle For So Long That It Starts Hate..
^ ^ That was the dopest part to me. . You leave love alone long enough with a chick and it comes back to haunt you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109846
^ ^ Lemme get some Feed. . Thanks.