Evo you know you my boy n' all but...



I didn't like this... at all... well I did like the imagery... but that's all... flow was blah... didn't make me wanna keep reading... I don't know fam... it's... *sigh* you know..?


I think you should redo this... get more metas in there... make it flow a bit more... well maybe it's me... I'd rather drop more into a bar than less naw mean..? If I have too...


all in all... I'm sorry... no impressed...




*hands you a dollar*



Get me a super size fry...