Rhymes Have Gained Eloquence, I Remain Heaven Sent
I Surpassed A Sixth N Made Hip Hop My Seventh Sense

^ That bar was Ill as fuck ^

I was feeling this. You had a nice approach, and your lines grabbed my attention. I didnt see anything incredably wrong with this piece. You used your emotions, and those are the strongest keys to a song. I was feeling it, your really coming up hommie. This had a good flow, rather simple rhyme scheme... But it didnt effect it in any way. I liked it alot, your did a good job hommie... Keep it up...

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