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Old 01-30-04, 01:26 PM   #5
Menik
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This was ok.....strucuture needs fixed up a lot......you had multies through out the piece which made it a better read....had some ok vocab....the content in those were..ok...but just keep elevating and you will get there man....and keep at it.
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