erry verry nice

spitacular- your verse was nice and cocentrated alot on ow it goes down from begining ( getting started) the maybe ending ( quiting retiring)
the only thing was that you could of cut out the '"" and lil things it made your verse distracting but none the less you did well on writing this

under rated- the problem i only saw with your verse was that you concentrated i thought on only RB, but we are on RB so does it matter? any way yur verse was very nice, i was feeling it from beging to end and the flow was beutiful.I think you also took the vocab but none the less touched the topic very well.

my vote goes to : under rated

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