word the topic is NET RAP...you got 20 - 30 lines ..
i got shit to do and i don't wanna rush so its do by the end of the night...as in 12 pm central...1 am eastern.....word

yo man when this fu gonna spit and check out this battle and hook a brotha up wit some votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...964#post1129964

NET RAP
by TheUnderRated

A community of outkasts cause society labels them as different
Spiritually lost in this net doomed to be lyrically gifted
Record execs show no respect professional mc's call them fakes
They debate over the revolution is the outcome worth the stakes?
Should the two worlds collide, should we let them inside?
Our board is our home, our ignorance to it our true pride
There's so many great mc's stuck in this net; fuck record execs
Snatch your demos out of decks give your scripts no respect
We didn't choose to have mad lyrics taking over our brain
Y'all don't wanna hear it so we pirate skills through the main frame
we train within our ranks preparing for verbal assault
we build our armor out of dreams hopes and insults
Wits end to rhyme reapers old and new crews unite
Take your landmindz in an instant grab a mic join the fight
We've been strong thus far to avoid Darwinian theory
But fuck survival of the fittest it's survival of the weary
How many left will still rep what little foundations we have left
Pick up your weapon if you down soldiers take a forward step
There's so much more to this than random key tapping
re surface your deepest lyrics kid, never stop rapping
But know there's a million man march each ones alike
Lost in a sea of mc's speak up turn on your mic
This net rap is yours kid you can be a legend elevate
For that day you measure up to any man and every man calls you great

Net Rap
by the one and only $pitacular...nuf said


Flowin hot as hell got that ego Growin, ready to Blow & Knowin you Hot
Spit on the Net, Expectin Respect... and get 30 little Kids sayin you Not
I see it all the time... You can always tell when an MC first Comes to RB
Thinkin they spit Fire, but when they don't get Admired.... they Start Beef
Then One of Two things Happen... Either they completely stop Net Rappin
or they Realize the subtle Differences... and then Instantly start Adaptin
It's like High School, Net 'Vets' control the board with Dickrider Empires
to Encourage Newbs to Retire... with Discouragement to Put out their Fire
Newcomers Who Wonder why it's Like this: because you Suck at Textceein
cuz you ain't Seein it Right Yet... but Elevate, and U might put up a Fight Yet
The Hardest Part is Keepin Heart when it's Dark & you ain't Seein the Light Yet
even Witty Insults can get Shitty Results... cuz Jealousy gets you Hated
but keep Merkin and Workin on your Text and bet even Vets 'ill Appreciate it
Just always remember - it's the Net, not a Record Exec... and not a Lable
it's 10 - 30 year olds who never made it... tryin to be hard through a Cable
It's Funny to see Textcees usin Big Words they could never Spit Poetic
the only reason they spit Text on the Net is cuz their Flow's Pathetic
so when you get made fun of & Laughed At, I suggest you Laugh Back
cuz the peeps that take this shit Serious... are the ones who Can't Rap

Word.

Whew! This shits ill! An not a single vote?? -smh-

Havin read each verse twice im still stuck for a decision.. both of u came real.. different concepts an styles but ill none the same.. some of the realest words been typed above an props to both of u..

therefore i cant vote cos im feelin both equally..

VoTe = Both

An mad respect to both of u.. keep doin u..

-salutes-

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Nice Topical Here....Im Considering For Trying Topical Too...But I Think Under Stuck To The Subject At Hand And Even Showed Emotion In Some Parts....While Spit Had A Nice Verse....But He Seemed More Aggressive In Some Parts Which Is Something You Shouldnt Do In Topical Battles...

Quotables:

^Nice Concepts And Good Point


^Seemed Emotional And Nice Use Of Metaphors


^Once Again...Nice Concepts And You Show Good Points

Opener - Under
Closer - Under
Vocab - Spit
Metas - Under
Originality - Under
Emotion - Tie...Spit Showed Aggression While Under Showed Thoughts

Vote - Under....Sorry Spit But You Seemed Like You Was Battling In Some Parts Honestly....Under Had A Better Developed Verse With Good Points And A Nice Theme....

I'm going with Spit on this one...

Not because it was structured better...

Or because he had better vocab...

Or even better flow.

I'm voting for him because, in my head...

He got the topic right.

Or at least we share the same views.

So, his had more impact on me.

I'm in this to fuck around, have fun, gain a bit of "net respect"...

And that's about it.

I'm not even thinking bout record execs when I'm typing a verse.

I have a job, a career.

I simply felt Spit's more.

I guess that's what topicals are about.

Spit

Peace

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

and here ya go i'll up it for the first time don't sleep on this read guys it was a nice battle let us know what ya think.............

uppin 1..... don't sleep people................

uppin2............................................ .......

someone vote................... damn

uppin3 already

uppin xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx222222222222222222i agree c mon guys its a good battle drop your vote and let us know what you think thanx

goddamn it battles aren't supposed to take this long in FL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin4

they call me a dang newbie so i can't vote..
HONEST as i can sincerely be both verse were ill..(canibus should motivate us all..lol)

TheUnderRated - flow was disgustingly hot and the vocab, flow, creativity, thought and emmotion were what proves the difference between real emceein' and mainstream/netstream garbage that is just weak reincarnated topics that are played to death..anyways very hot for what its worth...i thought ur vocab was better

$pitacular - You produced another piece of poetry that was equally, what i consider RAP. your flow, creativity,vocab, and originality was very sick. you as well can be labled an emcee in my book..lol..i thought your closing was better because its like u wrote what i've been hoping peeps would realize forever.
"(even Witty Insults can get Shitty Results... cuz Jealousy gets you Hated
but keep Merkin and Workin on your Text and bet even Vets 'ill Appreciate it
Just always remember - it's the Net, not a Record Exec... and not a Lable
it's 10 - 30 year olds who never made it... tryin to be hard through a Cable
It's Funny to see Textcees usin Big Words they could never Spit Poetic
the only reason they spit Text on the Net is cuz their Flow's Pathetic
so when you get made fun of & Laughed At, I suggest you Laugh Back
cuz the peeps that take this shit Serious... are the ones who Can't Rap")

i agree with illtalic - BOTH...nufsaid(it should of been a colab)